Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 

no one needs time. by =XxWreckoningxX:iconXxWreckoningxX:



It felt like September when we fell in love.
When we rode around in my car with the windows down,
the air seemed to take on a feeling close to chilled water soothing a burning throat.
It felt almost like the way you’d breathe warm air onto my bare neck when I told you not to.
There was no smell of barbeques to distract us, only a smell that reminded me of clean laundry and the way I liked to cuddle closer into your chest when it was cold outside the covers.

And when October comes we won’t be in love.
Scary things will pop out in front of my car,
and you know I can’t drive under pressure and you don’t have your license.
My friends will give me candy that won't taste as good as a stranger’s.
Horror movie reruns will keep me awake; and when I’ll be thinking happy thoughts, I’ll be wishing you were there so I could cuddle closer, breathe love instead of
oxygen.

I say we steal all the calendars.
©2009-2010 =XxWreckoningxX
:iconxxwreckoningxx:

Author's Comments

More prosetry than anything. I :heart: it though. I think I worked hard on it.
Please comment?
I had no idea that I'd finish it today =D Kind of ironic that I had this idea on Sept 1 and finished the piece on Oct 1.

-I'm submitting this to :icontheanimebutterfly: for her contest.
[link]
If you read this, tell me, is my piece well, creative enough?

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconagent-angel:
It's daggone beautiful :)
I love how you end on a happy note :hug:

--
we're more than artists, we're works of art.
~artistic-advancement
:iconxxwreckoningxx:
SHHH~ Don't let my other works know that it might be my favorite.
Yeah, I like it being happy too. :cuddle:

--
“Those who dance are considered insane by those who can’t hear the music.”—George Carlin

#artistic-advancement~~ProjectImprove~=RawEm0tion
~#Project-Pay-Forward~#DeviouslyInspired
:iconladylilith-mirae:
Lovelovelove.

--
:butterflytwo:
I'm not a seer, you're not a medium
I guess we'll have to look with our eyes.
:iconxxwreckoningxx:
:heart:

--
“Those who dance are considered insane by those who can’t hear the music.”—George Carlin

#artistic-advancement~~ProjectImprove~=RawEm0tion
~#Project-Pay-Forward~#DeviouslyInspired
:iconxxwreckoningxx:
=] Secrets upon secrets.

--
“Those who dance are considered insane by those who can’t hear the music.”—George Carlin

#artistic-advancement~~ProjectImprove~=RawEm0tion
~#Project-Pay-Forward~#DeviouslyInspired
:iconx-mirror-memories-x:
that.
is effing awesome :D
one of my favorites of yours

--
"To live would be an awfully great adventure."
----------------------------------<--------@
[5235;2936;5346;3825]
:iconxxwreckoningxx:
=D that made my day. :heart:

--
“Those who dance are considered insane by those who can’t hear the music.”—George Carlin

#artistic-advancement~~ProjectImprove~=RawEm0tion
~#Project-Pay-Forward~#DeviouslyInspired
:icondeadbecauseikilledit:
i wish my life was like this. this seems so peaceful and loving it sorta makes me jealous...

I love it though.

Details

October 1, 2009
1.1 KB

Statistics

20
8 [who?]
114 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map